You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the outcome levels of the primary kinds of fossil energy in the British country from 1981 to 2000 period. In general, petroleum and natural gas
are shows
a positive trend in terms of production levels, Change the verb form
show
meanwhile
coal gradually Add a comma
meanwhile,
declines
.
The Wrong verb form
declining
result wise
, petroleum leads amongst the three Add a hyphen
result-wise
fuel
that Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
start
at nearly 100 in the beginning and ended at around 140. Change the verb form
starts
Besides
that, natural gas also
follow
Change the verb form
follows
a
increasing amount of Change the article
an
result
which Fix the agreement mistake
results
is start
at almost 40 at first and Change the verb form
starts
finished
with a Wrong verb form
finishing
signigicant
rose Correct your spelling
significant
for
more than Change preposition
of
two fold
at slightly over 100 Correct your spelling
twofold
in
the end of the period.
Change the preposition
at
In
the other Change preposition
On
hands
, Coal shows a contrary outcome Fix the agreement mistake
hand
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
other
two Correct article usage
the other
fuel
which is its production at around 80 in the beginning and Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
then
plumetting
to below natural gas production in the middle and Correct your spelling
plummeting
finally
dramatically ended to below 40 at the end
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