You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the outcome levels of the primary kinds of fossil energy in the British country from 1981 to 2000 period. In general, petroleum and natural gas
are shows
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show
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a positive trend in terms of production levels,
meanwhile
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coal gradually
declines
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declining
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. The
result wise
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result-wise
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, petroleum leads amongst the three
fuel
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fuels
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that
start
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at nearly 100 in the beginning and ended at around 140.
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that, natural gas
also
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follow
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follows
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a
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increasing amount of
result
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results
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which
is start
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starts
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at almost 40 at first and
finished
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finishing
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with a
signigicant
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significant
rose
for
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of
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more than
two fold
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twofold
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at slightly over 100
in
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the end of the period.
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the other
hands
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, Coal shows a contrary outcome
compare
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to
other
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the other
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two
fuel
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fuels
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which is its production at around 80 in the beginning and
then
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plumetting
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plummeting
to below natural gas production in the middle and
finally
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dramatically ended to below 40
at the end
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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