The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words:
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First of all, Malaysia
have
grown relatively high since 2000 and Change the verb form
has
predict
to continue growing until 2040. Change the form of the verb
predicted
On
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In
the
contrast, the rest three Correct article usage
apply
country
have more stable growth.
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Second,
specifically looking at 1990 to 2000, Linking Words
Philippines
and Indonesia Correct article usage
the Philippines
have
increased Unnecessary verb
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while
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Philippines
and Thailand Correct article usage
the Philippines
have
decreased.
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Also
, Linking Words
this
phase seems to be one of the main characteristics differentiating the four into two parties: the former have relatively grown every year, and the latter have a slight cut down on 1990, and have grown back Linking Words
sine
Correct your spelling
since
then
.
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Third,
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this
graph provides not only historical information but Linking Words
also
future predictions. Linking Words
Overall
the prediction is optimistic, Linking Words
that is
to Linking Words
said
, all of them should have over 10 Change the form of the verb
say
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
of
growth.Change preposition
apply
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