The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words:

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words:
First of all, Malaysia
have
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grown relatively high since 2000 and
predict
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to continue growing until 2040.
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the
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contrast, the rest three
country
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countries
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have more stable growth.
Second,
specifically looking at 1990 to 2000,
Philippines
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the Philippines
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and Indonesia
have
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increased
while
Philippines
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the Philippines
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and Thailand
have
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decreased.
Also
,
this
phase seems to be one of the main characteristics differentiating the four into two parties: the former have relatively grown every year, and the latter have a slight cut down on 1990, and have grown back
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then
.
Third,
this
graph provides not only historical information but
also
future predictions.
Overall
the prediction is optimistic,
that is
to
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, all of them should have over 10
percent
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of
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growth.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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