You should spend about 20 minutes on this task, The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014: Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant: Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task,

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three

metals during 2014:

Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant:

Write at least 150 words.
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This
graph shows the monthly percentage changes In
price
Correct article usage
the price
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of copper, nickel, and zinc. Speaking in general, the numbers
are
Wrong verb form
were
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relatively high
in
Change the preposition
at
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the beginning of 2014, and all
encounters
Wrong verb form
encountered
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a slight drop in the third
quarters
Fix the agreement mistake
quarter
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, but
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
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bounced back up
at the end
of the year. To provide a more detailed description, starting from January to May the monthly change numbers remain positive, but they all have the tendency to decline through each month. To be noted, there is a sharp drop in July for all three materials,
and
Correct word choice
apply
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followed
with
Change preposition
by
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continuing
Correct article usage
a continuing
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decrease in the next three
month
Fix the agreement mistake
months
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for Nickel and Zinc,
while
Copper
have
Change the verb form
has
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already
getting
Change the verb form
got
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back to the positive interval.
At the end
of 2014, both of the three materials
has
Unnecessary verb
apply
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went back to positive growth.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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