You should spend about 20 minutes on this task, The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014: Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant: Write at least 150 words.
This
graph shows the monthly percentage changes In price
of copper, nickel, and zinc. Speaking in general, the numbers Correct article usage
the price
are
relatively high Wrong verb form
were
in
the beginning of 2014, and all Change the preposition
at
encounters
a slight drop in the third Wrong verb form
encountered
quarters
, but Fix the agreement mistake
quarter
have
bounced back up Unnecessary verb
apply
at the end
of the year.
To provide a more detailed description, starting from January to May the monthly change numbers remain positive, but they all have the tendency to decline through each month. To be noted, there is a sharp drop in July for all three materials, and
followed Correct word choice
apply
with
Change preposition
by
continuing
decrease in the next three Correct article usage
a continuing
month
for Nickel and Zinc, Fix the agreement mistake
months
while
Copper have
already Change the verb form
has
getting
back to the positive interval. Change the verb form
got
At the end
of 2014, both of the three materials has
went back to positive growth.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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