The line graph shows the changes in the amount of visiters Art gallery, pavilion, pier and festival in Brighton between 1980 and 2010.
The line graph illustrates how many individuals visited four different areas in Brighton during a 30-year time period.
Overall
, the minority of people visited the pier, while
the pavilion had the highest average visitors.
One notable observation is the upsurge at the pavilion from 1985 to 1995, where it then
started to decline from 2000. However
, the pavilion had the highest amount of visitors throughout the 30 years, at approximately 48%. Moreover
, the popularity of festivals remained the same, as it fluctuated with
about 2%. Following, art galleries increased dramatically from 1980 to 1985, but Change preposition
by
then
started to decline dramatically and continued to do so. Hence
, art galleries declined by more than 10%. Lastly
, piers fluctuated up and down before it started to increase gradually from 10% to 22%.Submitted by jessicajreichel on
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