low cost airline let people travel around the world. Some say it is positive, other say it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In

this

day and age,

noone

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no one

can deny that our demand in

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of

traveling

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is

one

of

natural

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demand

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of

human

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and the evolution of low-cost

airlines

accommodate and

let

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people

with

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travel

around the world more easier.

Someone

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believe that the advantages of

this

innovation

while

the

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others prefer to think that low-cost

airlines

bring about lots of damaging effects.It is important to admit that both views have their own

benefits

. In

this

essay, I will discuss the possible reasons that support each view and what

benefits

they bring to

the

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society. On the

one

hand, the option to think that the pros of cheap

airlines

has

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its

benefits

for many convincing reasons. Most importantly,

one

positive of

this

development is the

increased

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of

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travel

in all walks of

lives

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.

For example

, in the past

traveling

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by air was mainly reserved for rich people,

however

, low-cost

airlines

offer

more

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reasonable

price

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prices

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for

airing

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travel

to go on vacation domestically or to foreign countries.

Furthermore

, it is

also

important to mention that it contributes more income for the tourism industry and globalization process.

For instance

, in Thailand where the government focuses a lot on the tourism industry, flights are considered to be cheaper as compared to other countries

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to more and more

traveller

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come

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here and

this

is an attempt to attract tourists easily and boost the country's economy. In spite of that, I contend that low-cost

airlines

are a negative growth.

One

of the

drawback

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of cheap

airlines

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expansion is

the a

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release of carbon

emission

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emissions

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which released from using fossil fuels ( coal, gas,

petro

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petrol

…).

Consequently

, if there are numerous

of

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people

travel

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by

planes

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because of the cheaper price, the gas emission will

be

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pile up in the atmosphere and destroy the earth’s ozone layer.

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,

this

is

one

of the most

reasons

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responsible for greenhouse gas and global warming. Another key reason is

the

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low-cost

airplanes

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is

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the main reason that

bring

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about

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slowdown in other types of transportation. Cheap

airplane

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bring

to

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user

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the most service in everything ( saving time, better service,….)

while

the others can’t do that.

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, low-cost

airplanes

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aeroplanes

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can take you 10 times faster than a ship or a train

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while

the tickets get a similar price or

it’s

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service will be better than the

others

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transportation many times. In conclusion, a cheap plane ticket has its

benefits

and drawbacks. Even though low-cost

airline

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has its

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positive

effect

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but

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it

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the immediate

benefits

and natural and

ourself

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have to suffer many consequences later, i believe that there are more negative

impact

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of low-cost

airlines

so we need to gì đó con

kbiet

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kbit

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