The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.
The line graph illustrates data from four different nations that show the manufacturing of
fruit
over a 40-year time period; 1970 to 2010. Overall
, the majority of produced fruit
occurred in Spain for the entire time period, whereas
Germany produced the least amount of fruit
.
The most notable observation upon first analysing the information is that fruit
production was predominantly held by Spain for over 40 years. Initially
, Spain produced about 5.7 million
tonnes
of fruit
, which increased from 1970 to 1980, whereafter it gradually declined to an average of 5.1 million
tonnes
in 2010. Moreover
, Turkey and France are positively correlated as both indicated continuous growth and manufacturing improved by about 2%, respectively. Given this
, it is evident that France's production fluctuated throughout the years. Lastly
, a minority of fruit
was produced in Germany, which declined from 1970 to 2010 with over 1.2 million
tonnes
, however
, production was steady between 1989 and 1995 at 1.5 million
tonnes
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