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The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The given
process
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 illustrates Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion, which is the production of
electricity
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. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, the
process
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 consists of two main steps beginning with the warm seawater converting to
water
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 vapour by solar energy and culminating with drinking
water
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 production. First of all,
water
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 on the surface of the sea, which is at
29-degree
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a 29-degree
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 temperature by solar energy, enters a chamber which is evaporated and is separated from salt. After evaporating saltless
water
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 streams by means of a tube for
electricity
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.
This
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water
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 vapour generates
electricity
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 with a turbine. In the second part,
water
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 which is used for
electricity
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 goes down and comes
in
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into
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 another chamber which
is fulfilled
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fulfils
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condensing
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the condensing
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process
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. Drinking
water
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 is prepared
at the end
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 of
this
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process
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.
Furthermore
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, the amount of salt, which
are
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is
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 separated from
water
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,
join
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joins
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 cold seawater, which is the deep level of the sea, via special tubes, and is removed as waste salt
water
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, electricity, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • OTEC (Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion)
  • evaporator
  • ammonia
  • turbine
  • generator
  • condenser
  • closed-loop system
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable technology
  • temperature gradient
  • environmental impact
  • electricity production
  • deep seawater
  • surface seawater
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