The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The given
process
illustrates Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion, which is the production of electricity
.
Looking from an overall
perspective, the process
consists of two main steps beginning with the warm seawater converting to water
vapour by solar energy and culminating with drinking water
production.
First of all, water
on the surface of the sea, which is at 29-degree
temperature by solar energy, enters a chamber which is evaporated and is separated from salt. After evaporating saltless Correct article usage
a 29-degree
water
streams by means of a tube for electricity
. This
water
vapour generates electricity
with a turbine.
In the second part, water
which is used for electricity
goes down and comes in
another chamber which Change preposition
into
is fulfilled
Wrong verb form
fulfils
condensing
Correct article usage
the condensing
process
. Drinking water
is prepared at the end
of this
process
. Furthermore
, the amount of salt, which are
separated from Correct subject-verb agreement
is
water
, join
cold seawater, which is the deep level of the sea, via special tubes, and is removed as waste salt Correct subject-verb agreement
joins
water
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