You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart represents the
relations
between the amount of time Replace the word
relationship
spend
on housework and the change in pawnshop of electrical appliances from 1920 to 2019.
Change the form of the verb
spent
First,
speaking in general, two
Correct article usage
the two
datas
Correct your spelling
data
dates
has
the opposite tendency, Correct subject-verb agreement
have
in other words
, as one spent less on house chores, the more electrical appliance
one owned.
Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
Second,
as we narrow down to focus on the differences between the three electrical appliances on the upper chart. It indicates several information
. Correct quantifier usage
pieces of information
For example
, in
1920 to 1960, Change preposition
from
refrigerator
Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
has
drastically Correct subject-verb agreement
have
raised
and become more popular, Verb problem
risen
whereas
the other two seems
to have more stable growth. Correct subject-verb agreement
seem
Also
, in the later
40 years, the usage of vacuum Correct word choice
past
cleaner
have caught up with the refrigerator.
The two Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
chart
expressed a negative correlation between each other. We could say that Change to a plural noun
charts
human
Fix the agreement mistake
humans
rely
on electrical appliances could substantially increase the efficiency of doing daily chores.Wrong verb form
relying
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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