The given diagram clearly depicts the step-by-step process of carbonated drink production.
The diagram illustrates the process of carbonated drink manufacture.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are several stages before the bottles of drinks go to the supermarket. The process begins with water
cleaning and ends at the packaging.
Looking at the first stage
of soda production, raw water
will pass through the filter, water
softener and some chemicals to separate the small contaminated particles which are unedible. Clean water
will be pumped to the electric heaters for a heating evaporation method, then
it moves through the cooling pipe and is mixed with the carbon dioxide in the carbonation process.
Carbonated water
from the second stage will travel in a long pipeline into the mixing tank, here is where the water
will get mixed by the three components which are colouring, syrup and flavour. The mixed water
will pass the filter one more time and then
pack into two types of packaging comprising bottles and cans. Afterwards, They will be packed in boxes and ready for delivery to the mall.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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