The table below provides statistics on several major metro(MRT) system aroun dthe world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about the data on railway public transportation in five countries, namely London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Tokyo, and Los Angeles,
along with
the year, distance, and maximum capacity
of the trains provided.
Overall
, it can be seen that the oldest MRT had a relatively higher length
and capacity
compared to the newest transport.
To begin
with, London produced the oldest train
compared to other cities; furthermore
, this
train
had the longest total length
at 1100 km
. However
, the maximum capacity
was overtaken by MRT produced in Tokyo, which accounted for 1434 million per year. In addition
, Paris was the second-oldest train
and relatively
had the biggest Rephrase
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length
and capacity
, with almost 600 km
and 850 km
, respectively.
On the other hand
, the other newest trains produced the least distance and dimensions. Los Angeles' train
that was produced in 2001 had the smallest length
, at just 14 km
, and a carrying capacity
of no more than 100 million.Submitted by yohanatheresia98 on
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