The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.
The given man-made diagram provides information about how to recycle
glass
.
Overall
, this
cyclical process entails 3 main stages, commencing with recycling glasses being cleaned, crushed along shaped into the final product.
The first stage is when people throw glass
bottles after using them in the right types of recycling bins, they will be delivered to the treatment plant. At this
step, the glass
undergoes a cleaning process where it is steamed in water at a moderate temperature in the sterilising machine.
Once the bottle has been sterilised, it comes to be crushed as well as
melted by heat in another machine to become a liquid state. Following
this
stage, that liquid will be poured into a mould that is
bottle-shaped, and then
, when the substance thickens, it is sent to the supermarket to be bought by customers. Finally
, a glass
bottle is put again to rubbing in order to continue the cycle after being used.Submitted by ©BEE SWARM DỞ NHẤT TG on
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