The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015.
The graph demonstrates the proportion of disparate devices,
such
as an MP3 player, a mobile phone, a computer and a tablet bought by households in the period of 20 years.
Above all
, the trends rapidly changed since 1995, the tablet was the latest invention at a
time.
In fact, Correct article usage
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in
the beginning of Change the preposition
at
a
time, to be exact in 1995 MP3 Correct article usage
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player
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players
was
owned by 15% Correct subject-verb agreement
were
and
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which
raise
to over 40% in 2015. Verb problem
rose
Next,
phone
gained popularity in the year Correct article usage
the phone
of
2000, and Change preposition
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finally
reached the top with a score 95
% in 2015. Almost the same Change preposition
of 95
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to the computer, which number of use, went from 7% up to Correct your spelling
happened
firstly
, 60% in 2005 and then
increased to the same point as the smartphone.
On the contrary
, an interest to
the tablet began between 2000 and 2005. People started to buy it more and its sales reached their first peak in 2010 and the second one after 5 years.Change preposition
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