The table below shows the amount of waste production in 6 different countries in 3 different years over a thirty years.

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The chart shows the production of

waste

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in six nations over the period of 30 years.

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, the amount of

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produced in most countries showed an upward

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The US

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was one of the major

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producer

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amongst the six nations. In 1980,

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the US

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produced 131 metric

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tonn

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tons

waste

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, which increased by 61

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metric tons

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in 2000. Japan

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showed

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upward

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as it produced 28 metric

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tonn

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tons

in 1980 , which rose to 53 metric

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tons

by 2000. Both

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countries together produced close to 80 % of the total

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. Portugal, Poland & Ireland

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showed an increasing

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but the amount of

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produced was not

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significant

as compared to US & Japan. In 1980, all

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three nations together produced

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waste

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of 6.6

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metric

tonn

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and by 2000 the number increased by approximately 2.5 times.

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, the only country that showed

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a downward

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trend

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was Korea. In 1990, it produced 31 metric

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tons

, which reduced to 19 metric

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tonn

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tons

in 2000.

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