The chart below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by one university, in 2005 and 2015.

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The pie chart illustrates how much capital was spent on various sections by a university in 2005 and 2015.

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, the majority of finance was spent on Teaching and research. In comparison to 2005, more money was spent on three categories

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administration and Management , maintaining campuses and Financial support in 2015. In 2005, over half of the income was spent on Teaching & Research and 48 % was spent in 2015. Though there was a slight decrease in the percentage of money spent on Teaching & research ,it was still a significant share of the money spent.

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, income spent on Library and Accommodation reduced from 10% and 16 % respectively in 2005 to 5% and 8 % in 2015.

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, administration and Management , maintaining campuses and Financial areas showed a slight increase from 6 %, 10 % and 5 % in 2005 to 16% , 15% and 8 % respectively in 2015.

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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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The chart below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by one university, in 2005 and 2015.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

Some people say that success is "10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work". Is hard work the key to success, or is talent also important?