The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005

The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005
The line graph illustrates the number of three different crimes which are recorded in Great Britain and Wales between 1970 and 2005.
According to
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the figure, it can be seen that
car
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theft
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in both countries is more likely to happen compared to others.
However
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, it seems like people are not getting robbed by street robberies. At the beginning of the period,
car
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theft
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and house
burgling
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burglary
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accounted for 0.40
million
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and 0.20
million
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respectively. Both of the crimes had a similar trajectory until 1980 when the
car
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theft
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still steadily climbed up
while
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the burgling hovered and increased again in 1985. By the year 1990, the
car
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theft
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was about 1.00
million
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and the house burglar occupied 0.70
million
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. There was a fluctuation in
car
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theft
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from 1990 to 2005 before it ended at the same number as in 1990
as well as
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the house burgling which declined to 0.50
million
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in 2005.
On the other hand
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, street robbery stayed constant throughout the period from 1970 to 1990 which registered just under 0.05
million
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. Afterwards, it moderately rose to 0.20
million
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in 2000 and levelled off until the end of the period.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, theft, million with synonyms.
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