The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart illustrates the amount of milk produced in
litres
in four countries, in three years(1990, 2000 and 2010). Overall
, it is clear that
the Netherlands always produced the most and Guatemala manufactured the least throughout the given timeframe.
First,
the Netherlands,
produced 11,262,000 Remove the comma
apply
litres
of mild in 1990 and it was approximately 433 times larger than that of Guatemala(26,000) in the same year. Furthermore
, the mild production gradually decreased slightly as time went by. Likewise
, Australia also
experienced a minor decline. It stood at 11,246,000 litres
in the beginning but ended up with 11,466,000 litres
in 2010.
Next,
Tanzania showed a notable increase in milk manufacturing in 2000, producing 1,42,000 litres
. After that, the amount marginally grew to 1,55,000 litres
. Lastly
, the milk-producing amount in Guatemala almost doubled in 2000, from 26,000 litres
in the previous year to 55,000 litres
. However
, it ended up reaching 84,000 litres
in the end.Submitted by aahhyu111 on
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