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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table chart illustrates the amount of milk produced in
litres
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 in four countries, in three years(1990, 2000 and 2010).
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the Netherlands always produced the most and Guatemala manufactured the least throughout the given timeframe.
First,
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the Netherlands
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 produced 11,262,000
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 of mild in 1990 and it was approximately 433 times larger than that of Guatemala(26,000) in the same year.
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, the mild production gradually decreased slightly as time went by.
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, Australia
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 experienced a minor decline. It stood at 11,246,000
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 in the beginning but ended up with 11,466,000
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 in 2010.
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Tanzania showed a notable increase in milk manufacturing in 2000, producing 1,42,000
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. After that, the amount marginally grew to 1,55,000
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.
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, the milk-producing amount in Guatemala almost doubled in 2000, from 26,000
litres
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 in the previous year to 55,000
litres
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.
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, it ended up reaching 84,000
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 in the end.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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