The Chart below gives information about the cultural changes among people in Germany and the Uk. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The Chart below gives information about the cultural changes among people in Germany and the Uk.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about the change in culture between
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Germany
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German
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and
UK
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residents. It shows the percentage of
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shifts
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in the different mindset people have.
To begin
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with, we can see that power distance is a constant culture in both
Germany
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and
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UK
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which shows that there is an equal distribution of power in both societies.
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, individualism and indulgence are more dominant in
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UK
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compared to
Germany
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with a percentage increase of almost 20%.
However
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, we notice that despite an increase in indulgence and uncertainty,
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population is less likely to bear uncertainty avoidance and pragmatism when compared to
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. We can conclude that
overall
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, there is a
mix
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acculturation
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UK
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the UK
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and
Germany
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whereby each
population's
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populations
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have different mindsets and these might depend on various circumstances
such
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as technological inventions, environment or contact with other cultures.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, uk with synonyms.
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