The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
graph
displays the statistics of (the Use synonyms
number
Use synonyms
at
tourists visiting a particular Change preposition
of
carribean
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caribbean
island
between (the Use synonyms
years
) 2010 and 2017) in the Use synonyms
year
2010, there were a quarter of a Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
that
stayed on Correct pronoun usage
apply
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
, Use synonyms
while
another 750000 Linking Words
visitors
Use synonyms
were staying
on Wrong verb form
stayed
Use synonyms
island
that Add an article
the island
an island
totals
up to a Correct subject-verb agreement
total
million
of Use synonyms
visitors
during that Use synonyms
year
. The following Use synonyms
year
, which is 2011, Use synonyms
half
a Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
for the Use synonyms
visitors
who were staying on the Use synonyms
island
, the Use synonyms
graph
doesn’t show and decrease or an Use synonyms
increase
because the Use synonyms
number
was the same as the previous Use synonyms
year
, which Use synonyms
is
750000 Wrong verb form
was
visitors
. Total Use synonyms
visitors
for that Use synonyms
year
was 1 Use synonyms
million
and a quarter Use synonyms
visitors
. Moving on, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
decreased to 250000 Use synonyms
visitors
in the Use synonyms
year
2012 Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
increased to 1250000 people. Add an article
the island
This
sums up to an amount of 1500000 Linking Words
visitors
that Use synonyms
year
.
In the Use synonyms
year
2013, 500000 Use synonyms
visitors
stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
Use synonyms
while
1500000 Linking Words
visitors
stayed on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
Correct article usage
the island
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
adds
up to 2 Wrong verb form
added
million
Use synonyms
visitors
that Use synonyms
year
. During the next Use synonyms
year
which is 2014, a total Use synonyms
at
one Change preposition
of
million
Use synonyms
visitors
stayed on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
Use synonyms
while
the same Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
remained consistent which is 1500000 people, totalling up to two Add an article
the island
million
and a Use synonyms
half
Use synonyms
visitors
that Use synonyms
year
. For the Use synonyms
year
2015, 1250000 Use synonyms
visitors
were staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
and 1500000 tourists were staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
, showing no changes from the previous Add an article
the island
year
. The total of tourists in that Use synonyms
year
increased to 2750000 Use synonyms
visitors
. The total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
remained the same in the following Use synonyms
year
which is 2016 Use synonyms
where
it Correct word choice
when
summed up
1500000 Verb problem
apply
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
and 1250000 Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
. In the final Add an article
the island
year
. Use synonyms
Change preposition
In 2017
2017
, the Change preposition
In 2017
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
and staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the island
island
Correct article usage
the island
Use synonyms
Replace the word
increased
increase
to three and a Wrong verb form
increased
half
Use synonyms
million
of Use synonyms
visitors
. The Use synonyms
graph
showed an Use synonyms
increase
of Use synonyms
half
a Use synonyms
million
for the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
which totals up to two Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
. As for the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
, the Add an article
the island
graph
Use synonyms
also
increased Linking Words
for
a quarter Change preposition
by
million
which adds up to a total of 1500000 Use synonyms
visitors
that Use synonyms
year
.
Through the Use synonyms
years
, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
showed an unstable Use synonyms
increase
and decrease for the first four Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
,
but continued to Remove the comma
apply
increase
in the next Use synonyms
year
onwards. As for the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
staying on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
island
, there was no progress of Add an article
the island
increase
or decrease in the first two Use synonyms
years
which are 2010 and 2011 but the Use synonyms
graph
rose until it remained constant for three consecutive Use synonyms
years
in a row. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
then
slacked off in the Linking Words
year
2016Use synonyms
,
but managed to Remove the comma
apply
increase
to the same level as the Use synonyms
year
before the previous in 2017. All in all, the Use synonyms
graph
showed an outstanding performance for the total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
throughout
2011 to 2017, where it increased gradually every single Change preposition
from
year
except from 2015 to 2016 Use synonyms
where
it remained constant.Correct word choice
when
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