The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
graph
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displays the statistics of (the
number
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at
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of
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tourists visiting a particular
carribean
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caribbean
island
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between (the
years
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) 2010 and 2017) in the
year
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2010, there were a quarter of a
million
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visitors
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that
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stayed on
cruise
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ships
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,
while
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another 750000
visitors
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were staying
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stayed
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on
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island
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the island
an island
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that
totals
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total
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up to a
million
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of
visitors
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during that
year
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. The following
year
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, which is 2011,
half
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a
million
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visitors
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stayed on
cruise
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ships
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for the
visitors
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who were staying on the
island
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, the
graph
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doesn’t show and decrease or an
increase
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because the
number
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was the same as the previous
year
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, which
is
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was
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750000
visitors
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. Total
visitors
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for that
year
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was 1
million
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and a quarter
visitors
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. Moving on, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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ships
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decreased to 250000
visitors
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in the
year
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2012
while
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the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
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island
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the island
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increased to 1250000 people.
This
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sums up to an amount of 1500000
visitors
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that
year
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. In the
year
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2013, 500000
visitors
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stayed on
cruise
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ships
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while
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1500000
visitors
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stayed on
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island
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the island
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that
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which
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adds
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added
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up to 2
million
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visitors
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that
year
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. During the next
year
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which is 2014, a total
at
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of
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one
million
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visitors
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stayed on
cruise
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ships
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while
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the same
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
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island
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remained consistent which is 1500000 people, totalling up to two
million
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and a
half
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visitors
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that
year
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. For the
year
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2015, 1250000
visitors
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were staying on
cruise
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ships
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and 1500000 tourists were staying on
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island
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the island
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, showing no changes from the previous
year
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. The total of tourists in that
year
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increased to 2750000
visitors
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. The total
number
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of
visitors
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remained the same in the following
year
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which is 2016
where
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when
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it
summed up
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1500000
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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ships
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and 1250000
visitors
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staying on
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island
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the island
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. In the final
year
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.
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In 2017
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2017
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In 2017
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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ships
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and staying on
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the island
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island
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the island
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increase
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increased
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to three and a
half
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million
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of
visitors
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. The
graph
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showed an
increase
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of
half
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a
million
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for the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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ships
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which totals up to two
million
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visitors
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. As for the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
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island
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the island
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, the
graph
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also
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increased
for
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by
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a quarter
million
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which adds up to a total of 1500000
visitors
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that
year
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. Through the
years
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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ships
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showed an unstable
increase
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and decrease for the first four
years
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,
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but continued to
increase
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in the next
year
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onwards. As for the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
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island
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, there was no progress of
increase
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or decrease in the first two
years
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which are 2010 and 2011 but the
graph
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rose until it remained constant for three consecutive
years
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in a row. The
number
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of
visitors
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then
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slacked off in the
year
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2016
,
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but managed to
increase
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to the same level as the
year
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before the previous in 2017. All in all, the
graph
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showed an outstanding performance for the total
number
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of
visitors
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throughout
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from
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2011 to 2017, where it increased gradually every single
year
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except from 2015 to 2016
where
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when
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it remained constant.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, number, island, years, year, million, visitors, cruise, ships, half, increase with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 11 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 11 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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