The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
graph
displays the statistics of (the number
at
tourists visiting a particular Change preposition
of
carribean
Correct your spelling
caribbean
island
between (the years
) 2010 and 2017) in the year
2010, there were a quarter of a million
visitors
that
stayed on Correct pronoun usage
apply
cruise
ships
, while
another 750000 visitors
were staying
on Wrong verb form
stayed
island
that Add an article
the island
an island
totals
up to a Correct subject-verb agreement
total
million
of visitors
during that year
. The following year
, which is 2011, half
a million
visitors
stayed on cruise
ships
for the visitors
who were staying on the island
, the graph
doesn’t show and decrease or an increase
because the number
was the same as the previous year
, which is
750000 Wrong verb form
was
visitors
. Total visitors
for that year
was 1 million
and a quarter visitors
. Moving on, the number
of visitors
staying on cruise
ships
decreased to 250000 visitors
in the year
2012 while
the number
of visitors
staying on island
increased to 1250000 people. Add an article
the island
This
sums up to an amount of 1500000 visitors
that year
.
In the year
2013, 500000 visitors
stayed on cruise
ships
while
1500000 visitors
stayed on island
Correct article usage
the island
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
adds
up to 2 Wrong verb form
added
million
visitors
that year
. During the next year
which is 2014, a total at
one Change preposition
of
million
visitors
stayed on cruise
ships
while
the same number
of visitors
staying on island
remained consistent which is 1500000 people, totalling up to two Add an article
the island
million
and a half
visitors
that year
. For the year
2015, 1250000 visitors
were staying on cruise
ships
and 1500000 tourists were staying on island
, showing no changes from the previous Add an article
the island
year
. The total of tourists in that year
increased to 2750000 visitors
. The total number
of visitors
remained the same in the following year
which is 2016 where
it Correct word choice
when
summed up
1500000 Verb problem
apply
visitors
staying on cruise
ships
and 1250000 visitors
staying on island
. In the final Add an article
the island
year
. Change preposition
In 2017
2017
, the Change preposition
In 2017
number
of visitors
staying on cruise
ships
and staying on Correct article usage
the island
island
Correct article usage
the island
Replace the word
increased
increase
to three and a Wrong verb form
increased
half
million
of visitors
. The graph
showed an increase
of half
a million
for the number
of visitors
staying on cruise
ships
which totals up to two million
visitors
. As for the number
of visitors
staying on island
, the Add an article
the island
graph
also
increased for
a quarter Change preposition
by
million
which adds up to a total of 1500000 visitors
that year
.
Through the years
, the number
of visitors
staying on cruise
ships
showed an unstable increase
and decrease for the first four years
,
but continued to Remove the comma
apply
increase
in the next year
onwards. As for the number
of visitors
staying on island
, there was no progress of Add an article
the island
increase
or decrease in the first two years
which are 2010 and 2011 but the graph
rose until it remained constant for three consecutive years
in a row. The number
of visitors
then
slacked off in the year
2016,
but managed to Remove the comma
apply
increase
to the same level as the year
before the previous in 2017. All in all, the graph
showed an outstanding performance for the total number
of visitors
throughout
2011 to 2017, where it increased gradually every single Change preposition
from
year
except from 2015 to 2016 where
it remained constant.Correct word choice
when
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