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The table below shows the amount of waste production in 6 different countries in 3 different years over a thirty years.

The table below shows the amount of waste production in 6 different countries in 3 different years over a thirty years.
The chart demonstrates the amount of produced waste in six nations over
20-year
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 period.
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, the highest measure for
this
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 figure has been captured by the US
whereas
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 the lowest volume is for
Ireland
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.
In addition
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, all countries experienced an upward trend,
although
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,
Korea
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 Is a country that saw a decrease
at the end
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 of
this
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 period. In 1980, the highest amount belonged to the US with 131, which was at least six times than all other figures, in
this
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 year
Korea
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 had no figure and
Ireland
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 was the lowest by 0.6 In 1990, the numbers changed and again the largest producer was the US with 151 ,
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 two of them were approximately 30(
Korea
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 and Japan) and in
this
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 year Portugal remained the lowest and
Ireland
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 had no number.
At the end
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 of
this
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 period in 2000, the first and biggest were the US with 192 and Japan experienced a dramatic increase and reached 53. Figures for other countries have fluctuated slightly and both
Ireland
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 and Portugal were
last
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 at 5 and Poland's amount of waste was 6.5. the only country that saw a decline in their number was
Korea
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 which reduced from 31 to 19.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, whereas".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, korea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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