The table below shows the amount of waste production in 6 different countries in 3 different years over a thirty years.

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Apr 11, 2024

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The table below shows the amount of waste production in 6 different countries in 3 different years over a thirty years.

The Internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects. Discuss both this views and give your opinion.

The best way to reduce poverty is to provide at least 6 years of free education for all children to learn to listen,read and count the number.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Both men and woman care more about their appearance today than they did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Too much emphasis is given or educating of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

96.In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? So you think it is a positive or negative development?