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The table below shows the amount of waste production in 6 different countries in 3 different years over a thirty years.

The table below shows the amount of waste production in 6 different countries in 3 different years over a thirty years.
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The table
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 the
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amount
 of produce waste in six
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 over a 30-year period.
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