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Benefited by the advancement of global transportation, students nowadays are able to travel to different places around the globe to study a tertiary course. This has thus become a heated topic , particularly around its pros and cons. From my perspective, it has some great merits which are worthwhile to be discussed and advocated to students intending to acquire their learnings in a foreign country.
A group of people think that in the future countries across the world won't have boundaries; Whereas, others believe that they won't change. In my personal view, the borders won't alter but global inhabitants will globalize.
The issue of whether grandparents should live with their extended family is partly a question of the traditions of different cultures or nationalities. However, the question of affordability also plays an increasing part, and so this debate is rather complex, as we shall see.
There is no doubt that environmental issues are becoming more pressing and that we need to take action to address them. Most people think that the loss of specific species of plants and animals is a main environmental problem. On the other hand, others believe that there are several more important problems. It has some bullet points which I will discuss in the forthcoming paragraph.
In our ordinary world society divides the community into groups, teachers and doctors make a great contribution and can attain their goals through their work and have a high level of wage,however, the people in sports and creativity should gain less. I totally disagree with this statement.