The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line chart illustrates the Linking Words
number
of closing and opening Use synonyms
shops
in a country every year from 2011 to 2018. The closures counts are drawn by the straight line and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
openings
counts are drawn by the stripped line. There were some fluctuations Correct article usage
the openings
of
new Change preposition
in
shops
and retired Use synonyms
shops
in those 8 years. But Use synonyms
overall
, we can see that there were Linking Words
less
closed and opened Correct quantifier usage
fewer
stores
Use synonyms
at the end
of the graph, both slightly and greatly decreased.
Closure of Linking Words
shops
began at the Use synonyms
number
of around 6500 Use synonyms
shops
in 2011. It was fluctuating until 2014. One year later, the Use synonyms
number
of shop Use synonyms
closure
dramatically dropped to under 1000 Fix the agreement mistake
closures
stores
. Use synonyms
Then
, it increased again to a few higher than 5000.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, shop Linking Words
openings
were highest in the first data, which reached around 8500 Use synonyms
openings
. It Use synonyms
was
declined in 2012 to slightly below the Unnecessary verb
apply
number
of 4000 Use synonyms
stores
opened. Advancement was happening two years later to 6000 shop Use synonyms
openings
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
then
gradually descended over the years and went to a Linking Words
number
of 3000 new Use synonyms
stores
in 2018.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, openings, stores with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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