It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Although
nowadays,most parents
and people
recognize it is violence that punish
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punishes
children
to learn that do not carry
out wrong actions, there are some Fix the infinitive
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people
who think there are
no appropriate Change the verb form
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way
except Fix the agreement mistake
ways
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to adjudicate
adjudicate
to stop their Verb problem
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children
to
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taking
action
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existence
. In my opinion, I disagree that Replace the word
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parents
should use hard
way to their Correct article usage
the hard
kids
understand which one is bad and good.
In general, Correct article usage
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the
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children
have to have Correct article usage
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right
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behavior
from Change the spelling
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early
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parents
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who teach
teach
them and become role models who Correct pronoun usage
who teach
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them to become kind Verb problem
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humans
human
in the future. Because Fix the agreement mistake
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ill mannered
is the most crucial part of all Add a hyphen
ill-mannered
people
's life and people
gain most personality when they are young. In this
way, they know do not need to punish young ages if children
do not hear their words
. It might tend to children
have trauma and complex pressure of mind. Children
who are under six years old their brain cannot develop enough thus
they do not have high standard potentials such
as adult's
and they have very little life experience and because of Change noun form
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this
they cannot understand why it is wrong and right. Add a comma
this,
Moreover
they even cannot recognize the reason Add a comma
Moreover,
of scold
them. There are various studies that amercement cannot affect the Change preposition
for scolding
children
stop to do erratic proceeding
. Fix the agreement mistake
proceedings
For example
, according to
one research boy learned curse words
from movie
and Correct article usage
a movie
then
he always told it to his family and friends. Furthermore
, his parents
hit him if he said
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curse
. After that, their son never said curse at home Wrong verb form
cursed
however
he always told
bad Verb problem
said
words
at school and hide
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hid
it
from his Correct pronoun usage
them
parents
also
imitated his parent’s
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parents’
is
beat and Unnecessary verb
apply
bullying
his classmates and has even more harsh character.
That's why Wrong verb form
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parents
should not punish their children
instead
of
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apply
this
they should always do right and Correct determiner usage
apply
tell
nice Verb problem
say
words
to their offspring. If parents
can treat nicely
and help others and Correct pronoun usage
them nicely
children
watch this
, it is clear that
children
naturally take correct
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example
from them even though Fix the agreement mistake
examples
kids
are too young. In addition
, parents
have to seriously consider that
what Correct word choice
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do
young girls watch on TV, Unnecessary verb
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phone
and tablets they Fix the agreement mistake
phones
interested
in which types of information and check that does Add a missing verb
are interested
this
contents contain violence and Correct determiner usage
these
crime related
events. If Add a hyphen
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kids
watch these kinds of shows, they tend to have view
that all of Add an article
a view
the view
this
bad events are normal.
In conclusion, all Correct determiner usage
these
children
do
not born with harsh or bad behavior, they learn all things Verb problem
are
while
they grow up. Therefore
, if parents
initially
can focus on themselves, Correct pronoun usage
their children's
children's
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children
people
and watching shows, they can prevent their kids
be mature become
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becoming
human
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