nowadays,most
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out wrong actions, there are some
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no appropriate
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except
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to stop their
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. In my opinion, I disagree that
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way to their
understand which one is bad and good.
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have to have
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behaviorChange the spelling
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from
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age and
are teachers
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them and become role models who
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them to become kind
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in the future. Because
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is the most crucial part of all
's life and
gain most personality when they are young. In
way, they know do not need to punish young ages if
do not hear their
. It might tend to
have trauma and complex pressure of mind.
who are under six years old their brain cannot develop enough
they do not have high standard potentials
as
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and they have very little life experience and because of
they cannot understand why it is wrong and right.
they even cannot recognize the reason
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them. There are various studies that amercement cannot affect the
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.
,
one research boy learned curse
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and
he always told it to his family and friends.
, his
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. After that, their son never said curse at home
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bad
at school and
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from his
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actions which
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beat and
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his classmates and has even more harsh character.
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they should always do right and
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nice
to their offspring. If
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and help others and
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from them even though
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,
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what
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young girls watch on TV,
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in which types of information and check that does
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contents contain violence and
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events. If
watch these kinds of shows, they tend to have
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that all of
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bad events are normal.
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not born with harsh or bad behavior, they learn all things
they grow up.
, if
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around
and watching shows, they can prevent their
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bad
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.