The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A quick glance at the charts
show
information about how Change the verb form
shows
many
Correct quantifier usage
much
energy
was used in Australian
household
and Fix the agreement mistake
households
second
chart shows data about the percentage of Add an article
the second
green house
Correct your spelling
greenhouse
gas
emissions
which result from household energy
use
.
Overall
, the most useful household energy
is heating and water heating. it was shown that Australian
's each family mostly use
heating systems because. Controversy, heating does not have many gas
emissions
thus
it rates as the third smallest factor of the diagram. However
, cooling is the least energy
of both two charts.
The most significant feature of the energy
used in Australian
households was heating followed by water heating which accounted for 42% and 30% respectively. however
, the gas
emissions
resulting from this
energy
use
were 15% and 32% respectively.
Refrigeration and other appliances represent 22% of the total energy
use
in Australia in
7% and 15% separately. Despite that fact, the Change preposition
apply
Australian
greenhouse gas
emissions
were almost the double
amount which were 14% for refrigeration and 28% for other appliances. Correct word choice
same
On the other hand
, the lowest percentages of energy
consumption included cooling at 2% and lighting at 4% with gas
emissions
that collectively made up 11% .Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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