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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table demonstrates the amount of
waste
 produced by six different
countries
 (Ireland, Japan, Korea, Poland, Portugal, and the US) from 1980 to 2000, with a ten-year gap. Generally,
while
 there were increases in
waste
 output of five
countries
, Korea was the only exception with a decrease within a 30-year period. The US stood as the top country that had the highest
waste
 production among those
countries
 since 1980 despite Ireland having the most significant rate of inclining. It could be noticed that despite there
was
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 Korea in 1980, the number of
waste
 dropped from 31 to 19
million
tonnes
 in 2000.
While
 the US maintained the highest position since 1980 with 131
million
tonnes
, it owned the lowest rate of increase with only 46% to 192
million
tonnes
 in 2000. Meanwhile, The
waste
 production of Ireland jumped over 900% in 2000, from 0.6 to 5
million
tonnes
. The other three
countries
 (Japan, Poland, and Portugal) represented similar figures
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 changes in 30 years, starting with 28, 4 and 131
million
tonnes
 in 1980 respectively, and ending with 53, 6.6 and 192
million
tonnes
 in 2000.
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