The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 178, 1860, and 2000.

The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 178, 1860, and 2000.
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information about the changes in a town , namely, Willington in three different years between 1780 and 2000. Looking from an
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noticeable transformations over the surveyed time frame. The number of homes
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increased,
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of green places showed a significant decrease. Moving to a more detailed analysis, there was a river which
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from the north to the west of Willington and the bridge was constructed over it in 1860. The farms and the forest were destroyed completely in order to create an empty space for homes,
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tripled from 2 to 6
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over more than two centuries. In terms of other discrepancies over the years, the road was built in 1860, before expanding in 2000 to make
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way for 5 new schools. There were shops which were developed along the river from the bridge to the wetland for
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opened in the
last
year of the survey.
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