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The charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in Dutch in five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in Dutch in five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts compare the
percentage
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 of different types of
energy
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production
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 in Dutch in 1990 and 2010. Looking for an
overall
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 perspective, it can be clearly seen from the graph that natural gas and
caol
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coal
 had the largest segment equally in 1990
while
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 nuclear
power
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 had the most
percentage
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 in 2010. It is obvious that only 6% of
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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were
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was
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 used in 1990 which was the lowest
energy
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production
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compares
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compared
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 with other sources of
energy
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.
Furthermore
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, nuclear
power
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 and oil had 17% and 22% respectively.
Likewise
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, it is obvious that coal and natural gas had almost one-third of
energy
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production
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 in 1990.
On the other hand
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,
Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
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 and natural gas
production
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percentage
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 fell considerably in 2010 which had the
least
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lowest
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percentage
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compare
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compared
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 with other
energy
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 sources.
Moreover
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, coal and oil had the same
percentage
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with
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of
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 13% in 2010.
However
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, we can see that nuclear
power
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 had only one-fifth of
energy
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production
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 in 1990, it jumped to around 70% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, energy, production, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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