A close friend told you recently about a major argument she has had with her parents Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Explain that you understand the reasons why they argued. •Describe a similar situation that happened to you once. •Suggest some activities to clear your friend up.
Dear Mohan,
Hello! How are you? I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter regarding your recent objections with your parents that you shared with me during our last
catch up
.
Actually, as you know very well our guardian Add a hyphen
catch-up
extremely
possessive about our career from the beginning of our teenage. Add a missing verb
is extremely
Therefore
, they have some restrictions that they think childern
should follow on it. Correct your spelling
children
Due to
this
, your parent abandoned you on decision
that you had Add an article
a decision
the decision
make
before Wrong verb form
made
to
going abroad trip for a month. No doubt ,you are right Change preposition
apply
with
your viewpoint that it would be Change preposition
in
a
great for you to improve your intellectual skills Change the article
apply
while
visiting different places but, they are worried about today
scenario as Change noun form
today's
this
kind of freedom encourages kids to indulge themselves in bad activities.
I believe you should solve this
concern with your parents because its
their responsibility to nourish their Replace the word
it's
it is
offsprings
with proper guidance and care. I would Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
appriciate
Correct your spelling
appreciate
if
you could understand on it and follow up on their decision .
Yours faithfully
PreetCorrect pronoun usage
it if
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task achievement
Try to delve deeper into your understanding instead of providing a brief acknowledgment of the situation.
task achievement
Expand on the suggested activities to cheer your friend up, as this part of the task was overlooked.
coherence cohesion
Work on developing a clearer logical structure, ensuring that each paragraph flows smoothly into the next.
coherence cohesion
When sharing personal anecdotes, ensure they are clearly linked to the advice being offered, enhancing the letter’s coherence.
positive aspect
The letter’s greeting and closing are polite and appropriately structured.
positive aspect
Your intent to offer sympathy and advice is clear, demonstrating an effort to address the task.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,