The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart offers a glimpse into the causes of worldwide
land
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degradation
by category, with the accompanying table Use synonyms
presents
the same issue by region, namely North America, Europe and Oceania.
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presenting
contributes
to Change the verb form
contribute
the
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apply
land
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degradation
worldwide, among which over-grazing plays the most crucial role, Use synonyms
resposible
for 35% of the Correct your spelling
responsible
overall
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land
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degradation
. The negative impact brought by deforestation and over-cultivation cannot be neglected as well, constituting 30% and 28% of the Use synonyms
degradation
respectively. The remainder is shared by different factors, occupying 7% in total. Use synonyms
Howver
, the Correct your spelling
However
overall
trend may mask considerable variations when dissected by region. A closer look at the table reveals that over-grazing remains the main factor of Linking Words
degradation
only in Oceania, with a share of 11.3% of the 13% of total Use synonyms
land
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degarded
. Correct your spelling
degraded
regarded
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Europe holds the largest Linking Words
land
degraded at 23%, the main reason stands Use synonyms
in
deforestation at 9.8%, as over-cultivation and over-grazing Change preposition
for
also
pose Linking Words
considerable
threat to Add an article
a considerable
land
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degradation
at 7.7 and 5.5 respectively. Only 5% of Use synonyms
land
is degraded in North America, with over-cultivation Use synonyms
contributes
a notable 3.3%, Wrong verb form
contributing
while
deforestation holds the lowest share.
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Overall
, the cause of Linking Words
land
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degradation
can be multifaceted, each Use synonyms
countries
should positively Change to a singular noun
country
adapting
measures to local conditions.Change the verb form
adapt
be adapting
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