The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
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line graph depicts the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the United
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Kingdom between 1981 and 2000. In general, Petroleum is the most product
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by citizens in the United
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Kingdom around 140
million
tonnes
of
oil
between 1984 and 1986 and
decrease
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in 1990
around
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100
million
tonnes
of
oil
.
However
, petroleum popular again between 1995 and 2000. And two products
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coal and natural gas
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around 80 and 40
million
tonnes
of
oil
in 1981, respectively. In 1986
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of coal dramatically drop approximately 40
million
tonnes
of
oil
and equal
natural
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gas. Coal
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level
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increase in 1985 and stable from 1986 to 1999 and
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again from 60 to 30
million
tonnes
of
oil
.
In contrast
, The natural gas stable at around 40
million
tonnes
of
oil
from 1981 to 1990 and slightly decline from 1991 to 2000. it has
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of point around 100
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tonnes
of
oil
.
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  • depletion
  • shift in energy policies
  • global oil prices
  • extraction technology
  • cleaner energy sources
  • technological advancements
  • investment in nuclear energy
  • diversification
  • traditional fossil fuels
  • sustainable options
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