The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
The
giving
line graph depicts the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the United Replace the word
given
of
Kingdom between 1981 and 2000.
In general, Petroleum is the most product Change preposition
apply
use
by citizens in the United Replace the word
used
of
Kingdom around 140 Change preposition
apply
million
tonnes
of oil
between 1984 and 1986 and decrease
in 1990 Correct article usage
a decrease
around
100 Change preposition
to around
million
tonnes
of oil
. However
, petroleum popular again between 1995 and 2000.
And two products are
coal and natural gas Verb problem
apply
use
around 80 and 40 Wrong verb form
used
million
tonnes
of oil
in 1981, respectively. In 1986 product
of coal dramatically drop approximately 40 Replace the word
the production
million
tonnes
of oil
and equal natural
gas. Coal Change preposition
to natural
has
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had
level
increase in 1985 and stable from 1986 to 1999 and Add an article
a level
the level
decrease
again from 60 to 30 Wrong verb form
decreased
million
tonnes
of oil
. In contrast
, The natural gas stable at around 40 million
tonnes
of oil
from 1981 to 1990 and slightly decline from 1991 to 2000. it has peak
of point around 100 Add an article
a peak
the peak
million
tonnes
of oil
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