All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a pressing environmental problem related to

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atmospheric

pollution

and

according to

the

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authorities, the major factor associated with it is the

consumption

of

cars

which

operated

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mainly on fossil fuels and now the major audience is in

the

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favour, to put the ban on these vehicles and switch to the those, whom engine is powered by electricity.I completely agree with

this

concept as

production

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and

consumption

of fossil fuel not only

effects

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land and its creatures negatively but is

also

major

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source of atmospheric

pollution

. First of all,

production

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and refining of oil and petrol

required

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extensive

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filtration process which is performed through

heavy duty

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equipment, which not only

consume

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a lot of electricity in

form

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of energy,

thus

wasting

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major resources. Not only that, the dumping of waste material in water creates

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, which is impossible to clean. These wastes from landfills

transfers

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to the aquifers, rivers and streams and when consumed by marine life, it not only is

hazardous

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for them

,

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but

also

the

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consumers.

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, from the samples of streams near

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coast of

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sea

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, it is observed that they contain

large

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amount of silica, which

consumption

not only causes silicosis but

also

creates a silica ring in

retina

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,

thus

effecting eye-sight

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.

Furthermore

, the utilization of diesel and petrol in

cars

and buses releases poisonous smog which

consisted

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of many harmful gases like carbon-mono-oxide and carbon-di-oxide gas which not only causes lung cancer in human beings but

also

harms the ozone layer

due to

which the world-ozone barrier

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severely depleted and green-house effect

is produce

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.

This

not only raises the temperature of

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due to

emission

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of cosmic rays but glaciers

also

started to melt.

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,

Ice

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of the

glacier

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of Iceland and

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Artic

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Ocean is melting continuously which has

direct

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impact

of

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atmosphere

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and climate changes occur drastically

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I personally believe it is

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common cause of climate change globally. The solution

of

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this

problem is utilizing

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electric and hybrid

cars

. The government already

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the subsidy on

import

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of electric

cars

and local

variant

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are

also

launching.

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example

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the Hyundai releases its first Corolla Hybrid car.

In addition

to that celebrities and stars are investing in Tesla

cars

which have zero smoke emission and

reduces

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environmental

pollution

.

To conclude

, I believe that In order to cater

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environmental needs of our surroundings and reduction of

pollution

both

in

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land and

the

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environment,

ban

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a ban

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on

consumption

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of fossil

fuel

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fuels

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is mandatory, so that

majority

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can adapt to

usage

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of

electric

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and hybrid

cars

.