The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville.

The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville.
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The maps illustrate how the town of Kimsville has developed from 2002 to the present.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graphs is that some
trees
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were cut down to make new facilities,
while
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the shopping
centre
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and the
city
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centre
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remained at the original site during the period given. Looking into detail, regarding the big changes, in the southwest of the town the
trees
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were cut down to make way for new apartments. A new train station has been created in the west of the
city
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centre
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,
while
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to the east, the factory was demolished to erect a new software company.
However
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, to the northwest of the
city
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centre
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, the
trees
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were cleared to build a football stadium. In terms of small changes, the shopping
centre
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and
trees
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in the southeast and northeast remain,
whereas
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the old cinema which was in the west of the
city
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centre
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was converted into a pub.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words trees, centre, city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential development
  • transformation
  • industrial areas
  • housing estates
  • service-oriented economy
  • modern apartment complexes
  • amenities
  • transportation infrastructure
  • congestion
  • bicycle lanes
  • eco-friendly
  • accessibility
  • public spaces
  • recreational facilities
  • quality of life
  • vibrant community
  • leisure
  • exercise
  • social interaction
  • well-being
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