Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience
It is widely argued that most
people
think Use synonyms
experimentation
on Use synonyms
animals
is necessary, but other Use synonyms
people
feel that Use synonyms
experimentation
on Use synonyms
animals
is unjustified and illegal. I believe that Use synonyms
people
need continued Use synonyms
experimentation
on Use synonyms
animals
, and there are alternatives to replace Use synonyms
experimentation
on Use synonyms
animals
.
First of all, despite Use synonyms
scientists
Use synonyms
do
no ethical concerns, Verb problem
having
experimentation
on Use synonyms
animals
can be justified. Use synonyms
Scientists
and doctors Use synonyms
made treatment
diseases in Wrong verb form
treated
people
, and they could do justified Use synonyms
experimentation
on Use synonyms
animals
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, experts use rats to cure diseases and innovate vaccines Linking Words
on
Change preposition
through
experimentation
. Use synonyms
For instance
, in 2020 amount of Linking Words
people
infected the COVID-19, and millions died of the epidemic in Use synonyms
people
. If experts made Use synonyms
experimentation
on humans Use synonyms
is
very dangerous, Unnecessary verb
apply
people
might die in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
experimentation
process. Add an article
the experimentation
Hence
, experts argue that Linking Words
experimentation
on Use synonyms
animals
Use synonyms
used
to treat disease in Add a missing verb
is used
people
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, alternatives to the Linking Words
corpses
of the deceased are available, if families are willing to dedicate the bodies of someone who has recently died. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
corpses
of the deceased are even more relevant. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
scientists
researched Use synonyms
these
the Correct determiner usage
apply
corpses
of the deceased. Use synonyms
Scientists
discovered the Use synonyms
corpses
of the deceased had got diseases and hurt before Use synonyms
people
had Use synonyms
alived
. Correct your spelling
lived
Consequently
, most Linking Words
people
no longer believe that it is necessary to Use synonyms
Use synonyms
experimentation
Replace the word
experiment
for
any Change preposition
with
animals
. Use synonyms
However
, it is believed that Linking Words
motst
Correct your spelling
most
people
think the bodies of the deceased are hoy in Taiwan, using them for Use synonyms
researching
procedures is complex and difficult. It is not easy to Wrong verb form
research
obtained
the Change the verb
obtain
corpses
of the Use synonyms
beceased
.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
deceased
be ceased
people
keep on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
experimentation
with new things, in order to change Replace the word
experimenting
people
’s and animal’s lives. But we must ensure to any humans and any Use synonyms
animals
, and they are doing to injury.Use synonyms
Submitted by wayne685241 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Introduction Clarity
Consider clarifying your stance on animal experimentation more clearly at the beginning. Mention whether you mainly support or oppose it, then follow up with your reasons.
Supporting Examples
Try to use examples more effectively to support your points. While you mentioned COVID-19 and research on deceased bodies, these examples could be connected more explicitly to your main arguments.
Cohesion
Ensure a smoother flow between paragraphs by using linking words or phrases that clearly show the relationship between ideas.
Grammar and Word Choice
Be cautious of grammatical accuracy and word choice to avoid confusion. Phrases like 'do no ethical concerns' and 'motst people think the bodies of the deceased are hoy in Taiwan' could be revised for clearer meaning.
Balance of Argument
Think about exploring both sides of the argument more completely. Discussing the ethical considerations and the significance of finding alternatives to animal testing will strengthen your argument.
Structure
You introduced the topic and provided a conclusion, establishing a clear structure for your essay.
Content Depth
You tackled both sides of the argument and attempted to provide alternatives to animal testing, which is commendable.
Topic Engagement
The essay opens up an important conversation on ethical considerations, showcasing your ability to engage with complex topics.