The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the households owning and renting
accomodation
in England and Wales. The period of time is between 1918 and 2011.
Correct your spelling
accommodation
Overall
, it is clear that
the percentage of households in rented accomodations
was higher than of the owned ones till 1971. After 1971 Correct your spelling
accommodation
accommodations
this
tendency changed to the opposite and the number rapidly grew.
In terms of the period between 1918 and 1971, most of the residents of England and Wales were renting the place were
they Correct your spelling
where
live
. It was almost 80%, Wrong verb form
lived
while
only around 20% owned it. In the year 1971
the Add a comma
1971,
percents
were equal, Replace the word
percentages
as
around 50 of either.
After 1971 Change preposition
at
propencity
changed and closer to 2011 we have over 60% Correct your spelling
propensity
citizens
of both countries living in Change preposition
of citizens
the
Change the word
their
owned
homes. In the Replace the word
own
meantime
the number of leased Add a comma
meantime,
apartaments
decreased Correct your spelling
apartments
in
almost two times and reached the point of Change preposition
apply
approximetly
35% in 2011.Correct your spelling
approximately
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