The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following bar charts depict what
graduate
and postgraduate Use synonyms
students
did after leaving college excluding full-time Use synonyms
work
, in 2008. Those activities include part-time Use synonyms
work
, voluntary Use synonyms
work
, Use synonyms
further
study and unemployment.
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both graduates and postgraduates preferred to continue their studies. And the least Change preposition
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number
of them decided to do voluntary Use synonyms
work
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number
of Use synonyms
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students
in the UK was way more than the Use synonyms
number
of postgraduate Use synonyms
students
, in 2008. Use synonyms
Also
, the Linking Words
number
of unemployed people was way less in the Use synonyms
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of Use synonyms
postgradutes
than in the Correct your spelling
postgraduates
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number
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students
.
17735 Use synonyms
graduate
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students
decided to do part-time Use synonyms
work
, 3500 of them did voluntary Use synonyms
work
and 16235 were unemployed. And almost 30000 Use synonyms
students
continued their studies. The Use synonyms
number
of postgraduate Use synonyms
students
that did part-time Use synonyms
job
and continued their studies was almost the same, 2535 and 2725, respectively. Only, 345 postgraduate Fix the agreement mistake
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students
did voluntary Use synonyms
work
. Use synonyms
Finally
, 1625 Linking Words
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were unemployed.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduate, students, work, number with synonyms.
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