The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The line graph illustrates the information about the possession of
cars
in Britain over a 36-year period from 1971 to 2007.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the trend shows the upwards movements from 1971 to 2007. Linking Words
However
, the number of households who had no vehicles experienced a significant decline, Linking Words
while
on two Linking Words
cars
category had increased considerably.
It can be seen that the percentage of people in Great Britain who owned three or more Use synonyms
cars
seemed to rise slowly until 2007, Use synonyms
although
during the first eight years happened to level off before it slightly increased. Linking Words
Furthermore
, it shows the same pattern over the Linking Words
last
30 years until 2007 and had a peak at about 8%. Other visible trends, for households owned two Linking Words
cars
had a significant growth up to the year 2007 and reached its peak above 20% Use synonyms
although
it experienced fluctuation the first year towards the end of the stage.
Linking Words
However
, the graph gives data about the figures for people who had no ride surprisingly had a fluctuation decrease to below 30% over the duration given years, Linking Words
although
it started with the highest percentage compared to the other categories. Meanwhile, the amount of people who only had one car levelled off Linking Words
tfrom
1971 onwards and made up the majority of the line graph.Correct your spelling
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars with synonyms.
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