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The chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates data about the proportion of British
people
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 giving money to charity in the UK between 1990 and 2010
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the donors in 1990 and 2010 had the highest
range
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 of 36-50 and 51-65
years
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 old.
While
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 the
people
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 in 18-25
years
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 old had the lowest similarity in both 1990 and 2010.
According to
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 the percentage of donors in 1990, there were younger
people
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 between 18-25
years
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 old around 17% and the 26-35
age
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range
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 increased dramatically to 30%.
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, the
people
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 in the 36-50
age
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range
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 had the highest, approximately 42%.
However
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, in the percentage of 51-65 and over 65
age
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range
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, there was a slow increase of around 30-35%.
In addition
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, the proportion in 2010 , the teenature in 18-25
years
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 old had the lowest figure percent just under 10%.
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, the number of young adults and adults in 26-35 and 36-50 increased significantly by approximately 25% and 35%.
While
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 the 51-65
age
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range
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 the peak of
overall
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 donors was around 40% and for the older
people
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 was a minimal decrease to 35%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, range, years, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charitable giving
  • demographic analysis
  • economic factors
  • social awareness
  • technological advancements
  • societal values
  • donation patterns
  • functioning and effectiveness
  • speculate
  • future trends
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