The chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates data about the proportion of British
people
giving money to charity in the UK between 1990 and 2010
Overall
, it is clear that
the donors in 1990 and 2010 had the highest range
of 36-50 and 51-65 years
old. While
the people
in 18-25 years
old had the lowest similarity in both 1990 and 2010.
According to
the percentage of donors in 1990, there were younger people
between 18-25 years
old around 17% and the 26-35 age
range
increased dramatically to 30%. Moreover
, the people
in the 36-50 age
range
had the highest, approximately 42%. However
, in the percentage of 51-65 and over 65 age
range
, there was a slow increase of around 30-35%.
In addition
, the proportion in 2010 , the teenature in 18-25 years
old had the lowest figure percent just under 10%. However
, the number of young adults and adults in 26-35 and 36-50 increased significantly by approximately 25% and 35%. While
the 51-65 age
range
the peak of overall
donors was around 40% and for the older people
was a minimal decrease to 35%.Submitted by name79sinlapa on
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