Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….,
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I want to help you for
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with
the
cleaning purposes as you advertised in the newspaper that you need someone to clean your house.
We are Correct article usage
apply
professional
Correct article usage
a professional
cleanining
company ,which is open Monday to Friday from 9 am to 5 pm . Correct your spelling
cleaning
We
are five members in a team and each team members have three Correct pronoun usage
There
year
of cleaning service experience . You can visit our online website and check Change to a plural noun
years
customers
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customer
also
.
I would like to help you because my close friend name Marry lives in your street and she told me that you are looking for cleaning professionals . Our company is always ready to help customers and their close
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loved
one's
.
I will help you out Change noun form
ones
in
weekdays but we are not available on weekends . I already know your house because I cleaned many houses on your streets ,so , Change preposition
on
i
think we could finish deep cleaning of your house in one day . Please visit my website "The Professionals" and contact me through email . If you have any Change the capitalization
I
question
you can contact me on 7797894062 and our business hours are 9 am to 5 pm.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Roopkamal KaurFix the agreement mistake
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vocabulary
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accuracy
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personalization
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structure
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tone
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