Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….,

Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I want to help you

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the

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apply

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cleaning purposes as you advertised in the newspaper that you need someone to clean your house. We are

professional

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a professional

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cleanining

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cleaning

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company ,which is open Monday to Friday from 9 am to 5 pm .

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are five members in a team and each team members have three

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of cleaning service experience . You can visit our online website and check

customers

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customer

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reviews

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. I would like to help you because my close friend name Marry lives in your street and she told me that you are looking for cleaning professionals . Our company is always ready to help customers and their

close

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loved

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one's

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ones

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. I will help you out

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on

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weekdays but we are not available on weekends . I already know your house because I cleaned many houses on your streets ,so ,

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think we could finish deep cleaning of your house in one day . Please visit my website "The Professionals" and contact me through email . If you have any

question

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you can contact me on 7797894062 and our business hours are 9 am to 5 pm. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal Kaur