Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….,

#mrs #barrett #woman #lives #town #someone #home #hours #summer #work

Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I want to help you

for

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the

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apply

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cleaning purposes as you advertised in the newspaper that you need someone to clean your house. We are

professional

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a professional

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cleanining

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cleaning

company ,which is open Monday to Friday from 9 am to 5 pm .

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are five members in a team and each team members have three

year

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of cleaning service experience . You can visit our online website and check

customers

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reviews

also

. I would like to help you because my close friend name Marry lives in your street and she told me that you are looking for cleaning professionals . Our company is always ready to help customers and their

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loved

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one's

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. I will help you out

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weekdays but we are not available on weekends . I already know your house because I cleaned many houses on your streets ,so ,

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think we could finish deep cleaning of your house in one day . Please visit my website "The Professionals" and contact me through email . If you have any

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you can contact me on 7797894062 and our business hours are 9 am to 5 pm. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal Kaur

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vocabulary

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accuracy

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personalization

Consider personalizing your letter more by sharing specific skills or experiences relevant to the advertised position.

structure

You have established a logical structure with clear paragraphs delineating different ideas.

tone

You have successfully used politeness and a respectful tone suitable for this type of letter.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

210 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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