The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK.
The bar graph illustrates how much
time
children between 10 to 15 years old spend chatting on the Internet and playing video games
on gadgests
on an average school day in the UK.
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gadgets
Overall
, it is evident that boys
on average spend more time
on
playing Change preposition
apply
games
than girls
, whereas
, girls
devote more time
for
chatting than Change preposition
to
boys
.
Regarding online chatting, nearly two-thirds of girls
use their tools for chatting while
this
figure stands at around 55% for boys
. furthermore
, the vast majority of both genders spend 1-3 hours for
it, about 25% and 35% for Change preposition
on
boys
and girls
respectively. Aprroximately
a quarter of both Correct your spelling
Approximately
genders
chatting Change noun form
gender's
genders'
time
is less than an hour. A mere 5 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
boys
stand in the 4 hours plus range and for girls
it around
4% higher than that.
In terms of playing video Add a missing verb
is around
games
devices, A huge gap Change the noun form
game
among
genders in Change preposition
between
notabale
. Correct your spelling
notable
While
85% of guys play video games
daily on averagem
, just above half of the Correct your spelling
average
girls
do so. For higher
proportion of Add an article
the higher
a higher
boys
the Add a comma
boys,
time
spent stands in 1
-3 range whilst it is less than an hour for the other gender.Correct article usage
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