the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the changes in the floor plan in a central library between 20 years ago and today
Overall
, looking at the picture, it is obvious that most of the plan
Fix the agreement mistake
plans
has
changed, and some rooms have even been expanded.
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Firstly
, the two tables and chairs that were located in the middle of the library were removed. On the left side, instead
of CD’s
, videos and computer games, they changed it into Change noun form
CDs
the
Correct article usage
a
room
for storytelling events which included 2 added sofas and fiction books
for children. The section of adult fiction books
was replaced to
all reference Change preposition
with
books
. Also
the reading Add a comma
Also,
room
from the previous plan became a computer room
.
Secondly
, on the right side, a room
with children’s books
was switched to a Lecture room
. Furthermore
, a section of adult non-fiction books
was reconstructed and became a section of adult fiction books
with an information desk and some self-service machines. An enquiry desk was replaced to
a cafe.Change preposition
with
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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