The diagram gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.

The diagram gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.
The line graph illustrates how many parcels were delivered by two main mail services organizations, namely
FedEx
and
TNT
, between 1920 and 2000.
Overall
,
although
FedEx
was the most popular company at
first,
Mikit was replaced by
TNT
towards the end of the chart.
In addition
, both of them experienced an increase throughout the given period.
To begin
with, the number of parcels delivered by
FedEx
was three times as high as that of
TNT
in 1920.
While
the former climbed dramatically to just under 25.000, the latter witnessed a gradual rise of 2500 in 1940.
However
, the figure for
FedEx
nearly halved to reach about 12.500, which
maintained
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at the same level as that of
TNT
in 1960. To continue with, the figure for
FedEx
increased significantly by roughly 8000 parcels,
whereas
TNT
remained relatively unchanged over the next 20 years, after which it saw considerable growth and outstripped
FedEx
in 1990 (20000 and 18000, respectively), peaking at 25000 in 2004. Meanwhile,
FedEx
stayed relatively steady until 2004.
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