The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.
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The provided graph illustrates how many vehicles out of 1000 had been stolen in 4 different states from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that the theft rate in Great Britain was the highest, being approximately steady.
Additionally
, the indicator of Sweden had an upward trend over the period. Looking at the data, at the beginning of the period the figure for Great Britain represented around 17, and experienced fluctuations, remaining almost at the same level in 1999. Turning to that
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Sweden, in 1990, it was far lower than Great Britain’s at just 6,
subsequently
, it saw a considerable rise to 14 in 1999. With regard to the indicators in France and Canada, they both were between 5 and 10 in 1990. From 1990 to the end, there was a gradual decrease to approximately 6 in France and Sweden,
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at the end
of the period.
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