You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the stay. - describe where you left the envelope. - ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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Dear John How are you, The reason why I am addressing you is that I have think problem

this

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issue important

documents

for me. My close friend John thank you very much my friend and

also

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for you

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you

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visit to my beautiful home because I told you thank you very much.

Moreover

, I stayed at

you

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house

last

week. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with

documents

you

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room.

Furthermore

, I told you I

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extremely important

documents

for work. I lose

national

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park or cinema. I do not remember

this

event and

also

you find these

documents

for me.

Moreover

, I ask you to return it to me by post. If you want, you can return it in two days.

Besides

that, I

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your home but I want you to return my

documents

. I am looking forward to your answer in the near future. Best wishes, Tom.

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logical structure

Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion to help with structure and flow.

greeting and closing

Begin with a proper greeting and end with a suitable closing to make your letter more polite and appropriately formatted.

single idea per paragraph

Focus on presenting one main idea per paragraph to keep your message clear and organized.

complete response

Make sure to address all points of the prompt clearly to fully achieve the task.

suitable writing tone

Adopt a tone that's suitable for writing to a friend for a more natural and fitting letter.

complete response

You thanked your friend, which is a positive gesture.

complete response

Attempting to describe where the envelope was left and asking for its return.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

151 words

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