You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the stay. - describe where you left the envelope. - ask him/her to return it to you by post.
Dear John
How are you,
The reason why I am addressing you is that I have think problem
this
issue important Change preposition
with this
documents
for me.
My close friend John thank you very much my friend and also
Change preposition
for you
you
visit to my beautiful home because I told you thank you very much. Correct pronoun usage
your
Moreover
, I stayed at you
house Change the pronoun
your
last
week. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with documents
in you
room.
Change the pronoun
your
Furthermore
, I told you I lose
extremely important Wrong verb form
lost
documents
for work. I lose national
park or cinema. I do not remember Correct article usage
the national
this
event and also
you find these documents
for me.
Moreover
, I ask you to return it to me by post. If you want, you can return it in two days. Besides
that, I go
to Wrong verb form
am going
might
your home but I want you to return my Verb problem
apply
documents
.
I am looking forward to your answer in the near future.
Best wishes,
Tom.Submitted by soglomovsarvar on
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logical structure
Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion to help with structure and flow.
greeting and closing
Begin with a proper greeting and end with a suitable closing to make your letter more polite and appropriately formatted.
single idea per paragraph
Focus on presenting one main idea per paragraph to keep your message clear and organized.
complete response
Make sure to address all points of the prompt clearly to fully achieve the task.
suitable writing tone
Adopt a tone that's suitable for writing to a friend for a more natural and fitting letter.
complete response
You thanked your friend, which is a positive gesture.
complete response
Attempting to describe where the envelope was left and asking for its return.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite