The line graph illustrates the population of three counties, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington state of Oregon which increased over 60 years, between 1940 and 2000. Washington has the highest population of three counties in 60 years

The line graph illustrates the population of three counties, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington state of Oregon which increased over 60 years, between 1940 and 2000. Washington has the highest population of three counties in 60 years
The line graph illustrates how the residents of 3 counties namely
Columbia
,
Yamhill
and Washington state changed over a 60-year
period
, measured by thousands.
Overall
, it can be seen that the population of Washington was highest throughout the
period
while
the figure for both counties
Columbia
and Yamihi had the same increasing trend but
Yamhill
was still modestly higher
at the end
of the
period
. In 1940, the inhabitants
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Washington were approximately 75,000
people
. After that, it witnessed a dramatically went up by over 125,000
people
in 1970.
Moreover
, in 2000 the number rocketed to reach a peak of 245,000
people
Columbia
and
Yamhill
followed a similar pattern, with
Yamhill
slightly surpassing in numbers, starting at 27,000 and 30,000 in 1940 respectively, the population in both counties gradually climbed until 1970,
then
rose dramatically to finish the whole
period
with 35,000
people
for
Columbia
and 45,000
people
for
Yamhill
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