You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show current rates of secondary and higher education among people in various parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs below show current rates of secondary and higher education among people in

various parts of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The 2 bar graphs illustrate
proportion
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the proportion
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of secondary
education
as well as
higher
education
among people in
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Europe, Sub-Saharan
Africs
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Africa
( SSA), Latin America, and East Asia.
Overall
, it is evident that a substantially higher percentage of adults achieve secondary
education
degrees than
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higher degrees. Another interesting fact is that women generally outnumber men by a margin in Higher
education
while
the opposite trend is noticeable in Secondary
education
.
In addition
, individuals in Europe are relatively the most educated and in The SSA are the least educated. Regarding Secondary
education
, an incredible 100% and
justbelow
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just below
90% of females and males respectively complete the degree,
in contrast
, only a mere
of
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about 20% of females and close to 9
percent
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per cent
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of people in SSA achieve
this
title.
Furthermore
, Latin America and East Asia rates range
40
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-50
percent
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for both genders. In terms of Higher
education
, almost 50% of European males get
this
qualification
while
this
figure stands at just above 40% for their women.
Conversly
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Conversely
, people
of
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3 other areas are considerably less educated than Europeans, resting at
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somewhere
in
20
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the 20
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% to 30% range.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words education with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trends
  • disparities
  • secondary education
  • higher education
  • rates
  • regions
  • significant
  • analysis
  • comparisons
  • economic conditions
  • social conditions
  • political conditions
  • highlighting
  • notable gap
  • observed
  • surprising findings
  • affirming
  • overview
  • illustrate
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