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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water
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 consumed for various aims in different
areas
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 of the world. In terms of the percentages of
water
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 used for industrial purposes, Europe ranks first (53%) among six
areas
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, followed by North America (48%) and South East
Asia
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(12%). Interestingly,
water
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 used by agriculture in Southeast
Asia
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 takes up 81%, which is more than the sum of the other two
areas
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.
However
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, the proportions of
water
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 utilized for domestic aims occupy the lowest in their respective shares. Turning to other
areas
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, Central
Asia
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, Africa,
as well as
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 South America all use the biggest proportion of
water
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 in farming, meanwhile, Central
Asia
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 (88%) ranks next to none among the six
areas
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.
Whereas
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 domestic use for those
areas
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 is the second occupation. Interestingly, the shares of
water
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 used for industries all account for the least, about one-tenth.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 agricultural
water
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 in six
areas
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 almost takes up the largest proportions.
On the contrary
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, domestic consumption of
water
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 used by those occupies nearly the lowest percentages.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, areas, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • percentage
  • water usage
  • agriculture
  • industrial use
  • domestic consumption
  • energy production
  • recreation
  • regions
  • sectors
  • overall
  • accounts for
  • ranging from
  • relatively low
  • in contrast
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
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