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More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, countrysides, and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

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 as cities, villages, and seas have been contaminated by
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a greater
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 number of
plastic
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waste
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.
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about
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the
factor
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factors
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 that contribute and
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solution
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 to solve
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 problem. There are many reasons why several places
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 as cities, villages and seas have been polluted by
plastic
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. One main factor is
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use
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the use
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 of
plastic
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 extensively. Today,
plastic
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 is
material
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a material
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 that
be
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 used in various places from
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rural to urban
area
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. Many individuals
also
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 utilize plastics in several life aspects
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 as household, food packaging,
tecnology
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technology
manufactures
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manufacturers
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and
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etc.
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,
lack
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 of adequate infrastructure in
plastic
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waste
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management
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influence
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in
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increasing
plastic
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waste
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. Nowadays, both villages and metropolitan cities still do not have
highly-quality
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of
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plastic
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management
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system
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systems
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.
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,
plastic
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contaminated
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is contaminated
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 everywhere which
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this situations
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will cause disease growth. The government
together with
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 society can tackle
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 problem with various solutions. The first
solution
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 is
increase
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enviromental
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environmental
 education and awareness.
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This
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 actions can be done by conducting education programs which have target
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society especially children and teenagers about the importance of
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waste
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proper waste
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management
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 properly and the negative impact of
plastic
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waste
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to
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 the environment.
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, local
council
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councils
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 can introduce
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environmental
 socialization programs
to
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 schools. The second
solution
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is reduce
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plastic
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use
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. People can minimise their consumption of
plastic
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 by promoting and encouraging
to
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them to
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 utilize the materials that possibly can
be recycle
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be recycled
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such
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 as paper, stainless steel and other materials that can
be recycle
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be recycled
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 and naturally
decompossed
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decomposed
. In conclusion, the factors which contribute
in
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 more
plastic
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polluted
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 in several areas are
,
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extensive
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the extensive
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use
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 of
plastic
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 and
lack
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the lack
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 of adequate infrastructure in
plastic
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waste
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management
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.
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Whereas the
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solution
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solutions
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 for
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 problem are increasing
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environmental
enviromental
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environmental
 education and awareness and reducing
plastic
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use
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