The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse- gas emission which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse- gas emission which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first pie chart shows the average Australian household
energy
consumption. The following describes greenhouse gas emissions
as a consequence
of
energy
use.
Overall
,
it is clear that
heating occupies most of the two graphs.
Furthermore
, in the first
graph
, cooling and lightning consume the least amount of
energy
when lightning is twice as much as cooling.
Similarly
, in the second
graph
, both of these factors are minimal, but the
lightning
Correct your spelling
lighting
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is almost three times greater than the cooling.
First,
on the
graph
of
energy
consumption, heating is slightly more than water heating, so they are used the most.
In addition
, cooling uses six times less
energy
than heating.
Also
, water heating
energy
consumption is twice that of other types of equipment.
Second,
heating water is a heating layer in the greenhouse gas emissions
graph
.
In addition
, the emissions of other appliances are twice as high as those of refrigeration.
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