Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development. Some people think that financial aid is important. Others believe that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is required for global

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to assist poor nations to guarantee

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sustainable and healthy growth. It is true that

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organizations

should provide monetary assistance;

while

other

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claim that giving suggestions and practical

aid

are more beneficial.

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matter. Proponents agree that providing finance to support the needs of developing countries is beneficial

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several reasons. Chief among these is that children, who live in poverty, need

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in order to have food or water to survive so that they would not be starving or thirsty.

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, in India, every

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given

financially supported

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by UNESCO and

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group want to fully fund them in order to help them with their health conditions. Another reason is that several poor people may not have a shelter to live in

due to

a lack of money.

As a result

of

this

, worldwide

organizations

decide to

aid

them by giving them some money so that they would have an

accomodation

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accommodation

to settle in like a house.

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accomodation

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accommodation

, they may not have to worry that they will be cold outside and they have an air conditioner to help them

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warm themselves.

However

, opponents firmly believe that practical

aid

and

advice

are more advantageous

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a handful of purposes.

Firstly

,

organizations

in other countries may work together to support a country like India to deal with an environment.

For

this

reason, India is more likely to

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air pollution; which

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in

sickness

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the sickness

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some Indian residents. In order to solve

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, UNESCO and other universal

organizations

must work together to reduce

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number of

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or motorcycles.

Secondly

, because most poor nations do not have a hospital, people may not be able to cure their fever or cough.

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, the

organizations

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governments of these nations to build a hospital by giving

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valuable advice

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advice

. In conclusion, the majority of people have different opinions on whether financial assistance is

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than

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practical support and

advice

. From my perspective, I wholeheartedly concur that practice

aid

and

advice

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more critical.