The diagram shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

#floor #plan #library #years

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The given maps

demonstrates

Change the verb form

demonstrate

show examples

the changes ac

Occur

Wrong verb form

Occurred

show examples

in a central

library

Use synonyms

on the floor

side

Use synonyms

during

Change preposition

for

show examples

20 years which made the

library

Use synonyms

look modern now.

Overall

Linking Words

, changes had taken place in every

area

Use synonyms

of the

library

Use synonyms

expect

Correct your spelling

except

show examples

the entrance. The entrance to

Use synonyms

library

Add an article

the library

show examples

south

Correct article usage

the south

show examples

direction

remain

Change the verb form

remains

show examples

unchanged,

while

Linking Words

major development

had occur

Wrong verb form

has occurred

show examples

in other areas.

Firstly

Linking Words

, the enquiry desk for tickets, book returns and so on and

reading

Correct article usage

the reading

show examples

room for newspapers and magazines

had

Verb problem

were

show examples

replaced by a cafe and a computer room respectively after 20 years. The tables and chairs used to be in

Add an article

the center

show examples

center

Change the spelling

centre

show examples

part of the

library

Use synonyms

however

Linking Words

nowadays they are no longer there. On one

hand

Use synonyms

, adult non-fiction

books

Use synonyms

and

on the other

Linking Words

hand

Use synonyms

, adult fiction

books

Use synonyms

were

ther

Correct your spelling

there

in the past on

right

Add a hyphen

right-hand

show examples

hand

Use synonyms

side

Use synonyms

and

left

Add a hyphen

left-hand

show examples

hand

Use synonyms

side

Use synonyms

of the tables and chairs .

But

Correct word choice

However

show examples

, the former

are

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

was replaced by adult fiction

books

Use synonyms

Correct article usage

an informatio

show examples

informatio

Correct your spelling

information

desk and three self-service machines. The latter

side

Use synonyms

was swapped by all reference

books

Use synonyms

Furthe

Correct your spelling

Furthermore

, the top North-West direction

area

Use synonyms

for Children's

books

Use synonyms

was replaced by

lecture

Correct article usage

the lecture

show examples

room. In the same way, the top North - East

side

Use synonyms

now has

expanded

Correct article usage

an expanded

show examples

area

Use synonyms

with

place

Add an article

a place

show examples

for storytelling events and children's fiction

books

Use synonyms

, but in past it used to be

Use synonyms

area

Add an article

an area

the area

show examples

for

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

CDs, videos and computer games.

Submitted by akshayashvi07 on Mon Apr 15 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.

▼

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

▼

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

▼

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words library, side, area, hand, books with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

▼

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

219 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
layout
shelving
reading area
reference section
encyclopedias
dictionaries
circulation desk
transactions
digital media
computer stations
multimedia rooms
café area
social environment
leisure-friendly
expanded reading areas
user experience
comfortable seating
children's section
engage younger readers

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Some people believe that schoolchildren should do their class work individually. Other people believe that sometimes class work should be done in small groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over the past decade, education has undergone a monumental transformation, largely driven by the era of globalization. The interconnectedness of our world has opened up unprecedented opportunities for students in marginalized areas to access information and knowledge that was once reserved for the privileged few. However, the COVID pandemic has once again highlighted the reemergence of educational disparities. This has reignited the ongoing debate about whether individualized instruction is superior to collaborative learning in small groups.
6.5
band
Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Have you ever thought of what to do with your first after graduating? In this day and age, there has been a rise in the practice of spending money without planning among youngsters, which has prompted calls for schools to take action to curb the problem. Yet, some argue institutions are not responsible for it. In this essay, I will be evaluating the viewpoints from both sides and make a judgment.
6.5
band
With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the Internet. What potential problems may this trend lead to? What solutions can you suggest to deal with it?
The younger generations in this contemporary time have gained an accessibility to social media more than in the past. In this essay, problems and solutions of this matter will be outlined in the following paragraphs before reaching a conclusion.
7.5
band
NOWADAYS many people complain that they have difficulites getting enough sleep. what problems can lack of sleep cause? what can be done about lack of sleep?
It is a common belief that a great number of individuals are complaining about not sleeping sufficiently, causing low performance in everyday activities and also creating a perfect environment for viruses to attack their bodies. however, there are some methods that can be done to resolve this issue by exercising and avoiding caffeine.
7
band
Aircraft have been increasingly used for transport fruit and vegetable to some country where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this generation, we cannot imagine that we are running out of fresh ingredients such as carrots, strawberries and garlic every day. Due to the development of transport, it is really easy to get fresh ingredients for everyone.

The diagram shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Some people believe that schoolchildren should do their class work individually. Other people believe that sometimes class work should be done in small groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the Internet. What potential problems may this trend lead to? What solutions can you suggest to deal with it?

NOWADAYS many people complain that they have difficulites getting enough sleep. what problems can lack of sleep cause? what can be done about lack of sleep?

Aircraft have been increasingly used for transport fruit and vegetable to some country where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.