The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The line chart illustrates how
many
stored dissipated and established in the state from 2011 to 2018.
Correct quantifier usage
much
Overall
, there was a decrease in the amount of boutique
opened and closed in the nation, with a much more significant decline being seen shops Fix the agreement mistake
boutiques
close
. Change the word
closing
In addition
, the number of store closes surpassed that of store open in 2016.
The propotion
of stores Correct your spelling
proportion
Correct pronoun usage
that dissipate
dissipate
in the country started at 6,000, after which it saw a rise Wrong verb form
dissipated
7,000
in 2013. In 2011, there were over 8,000 shop openings, followed by a notable drop in the subsequent year. From there, a steady increase occurred until 2014.
4,000 shops opened in 2015 in the nation, with a subsequent significant decrease to 3,000 in 2018. The number of store closures Change preposition
of 7,000
to reach
a drop of 1,000 in 2015, followed by a notable increase to over 5,000 in 2018.Change the verb form
reached
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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